gray skies-
a father teaches his son
to splash in puddles

—Chris Patalano
        

About the author: Chris is currently a student at Wesleyan University in Connecticut, but he spends his summers at home on Long Island, New York.

Contact: cpatalano at wesleyan dot edu

Responses to the haiku for 15 November 2006 by Chris Patalano

  1.  
    Alan Summers
    2006-11-16 06:22:52
     

    I loved this haiku!

    It also reminds me of my own, but quite different one:

    arboretum
    the only puddle I see
    a kid in it

    Haiku International journal, Japan, 2005

  2.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-11-17 04:34:42
     

    morning commute-
    water fowl swims by
    unconcerned

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