above the ferris wheel lights
a moon-smile

—Ross Clark
        

About the author: Ross Clark
Brisbane, Australia
rclarkbard at yahoo dot com dot au

Responses to the haiku for 28 November 2006 by Ross Clark

  1.  
    HarisH Suryanarayana (harish_physics at yahoo dot co dot in)
    2006-11-28 06:16:14
     

    Brilliant imagery . Very nice !

  2.  
    anthony slauson (tonyslauson at hotmail dot com)
    2006-11-28 07:33:24
     

    nice work Ross..I very much like the moon-smile combo

  3.  
    2006-11-28 08:05:55
     

    I love that moon-smile too! ;-)

  4.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-11-29 11:05:58
     

    spinning ferris wheel
    through the clouds...
    twinkling city lights

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