low clouds
her Halloween bag 
drags on the ground

—Marie Summers
        

About the author: Marie Summers, the editor of White Lotus, has been published in numerous publications such as bottle rockets, Frogpond, Haiku Harvest, Heron's Nest, Kokako, Mayfly, Modern Haiku, moonset, Paper Wasp, Presence, Simply Haiku, and the World Haiku Review, among others.

About the author: Marie Summers, the editor of White Lotus, has been published in numerous publications such as bottle rockets, Frogpond, Haiku Harvest, Heron's Nest, Kokako, Mayfly, Modern Haiku, moonset, Paper Wasp, Presence, Simply Haiku, and the World Haiku Review, among others.

Responses to the haiku for 1 November 2007 by Marie Summers

  1.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-11-01 07:00:48
     

    Good moment

    climate change
    a Hallowe'en devil
    wears flip-flops

  2.  
    magyar
    2007-11-01 10:03:20
     

    Marie, a visual 'throw-back!' Love the dragging candy bag!

    this ghost says thank you
    as its child stumbles away
    tripped by bedsheet hems
    _M

  3.  
    laryalee
    2007-11-01 17:38:35
     

    A delightful moment!
    And it describes last night
    with my grandkids...
    ;)
    Lary

  4.  
    Don Hall
    2007-11-01 19:57:35
     

    Very evocative!

    Thanks

    Don

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-11-02 14:42:29
     

    baby cries "daddy"...
    as he reaches for diaper bag
    men's head turn

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