With fearsome roar, Last autumn’s fallen leaves are blown away. Published by Pete Hoyle Pete Hoyle, Williamsburg, Va. sphoyl at wm dot edu View all posts by Pete Hoyle
pete, a question, why the necessity of using “with”. i get the impression there were words before this starting point. also, i felt “are” wasn’t needed. pete, some may think this writing showing cause and effect. however, i am not in agreement; i’d like to think, you showed it the way it happened. a thought that comes to mind, pete, had you written this as a one line haiku, as the masters had done, previously. fearsome roar, Last autumn’s fallen leaves blown away. i see, if one has perseverance, good things do come… Reply
pete, a question, why the necessity of using “with”. i get the impression there were words before this starting point.
also, i felt “are” wasn’t needed.
pete, some may think this writing showing cause and effect.
however, i am not in agreement; i’d like to think, you showed it the way it happened.
a thought that comes to mind, pete, had you written this as a one line haiku, as the masters had done, previously.
fearsome roar,
Last autumn’s fallen leaves
blown away.
i see, if one has perseverance, good things do come…
Northen star’s brilliance-
the leafless trees
at the mercy of the wind
summer fades —
silent new day,
as days before
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