Rusty roof creaking Under the hot midday sun Summer storms brewing Published by Nigel Chauncy Nigel Chauncy A novice haiku writer from Canberra Australia nchauncy at one.net.au View all posts by Nigel Chauncy
perhaps, i need a vacation. i wonder who would trade their home for mine, in south florida, for a week or two; by the way, it’s hurricane season. what can i say, that hasn’t already been said. nigel, too many words; some may think out loud, “bob, aren’t you (the) professor at this school of verboseness”. i was once informed of the problems (involving) too many words (ending) in “ing”. with that in mind, here my re-write: rusty roof- summer storms brewing sunny, until midday nice 5-7-5, nigel, however at times it’s not necessary. i enjoyed your thoughts, nigel Reply
perhaps, i need a vacation.
i wonder who would trade their home for mine, in
south florida, for a week or two; by the way, it’s hurricane season.
what can i say, that hasn’t already been said.
nigel, too many words; some may think out loud, “bob, aren’t you (the) professor at this school of verboseness”.
i was once informed of the problems (involving) too many words (ending) in “ing”. with that in mind, here my re-write:
rusty roof-
summer storms brewing
sunny, until midday
nice 5-7-5, nigel, however at times it’s not necessary.
i enjoyed your thoughts, nigel