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  1. 35 years later
    on the slope at kent state
    wildflowers

    two years later
    120,000 dead
    since the end of major combat

    i think haiku has to start including
    more than the usual pap if it’s ever
    to gain the merit the hsa mafia
    would like it to gain.

  2. joshua, least you gave me pause to think; be it nearly three years after your post. i imagine your “usual” insinuates the well worn verses finding themselves written repeatedly. as for the (merit), the haiku inspite of the (usual) already has this leg up in writing.

    to the day–
    bare rose bushes line the fence
    in cold silence

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