summer morning:
a mallard keeps just abeam
of the fisherman’s boat
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Charles Trumbull
Charles Trumbull is an editor for Encyclopaedia Britannica and lives in Evanston, Illinois. He has been writing haiku since 1991. He was editor (1996-2002) of the Haiku Society of America Newsletter, president of the HSA in 2004 and 2005, and an organizer of the Haiku North America 1999 conference. He is currently editor of Modern Haiku and proprietor of Deep North Press, a publisher of haiku books. No Web page yet; e-mail: trumbullc at comcast dot net View all posts by Charles Trumbull
Charlie! Keep those fishing haiku coming!
why is there a lack of originality in most current writings.
i’ll “try” to keep this brief.
in conveying nature, or being seasonal why do most fail to rise to the challenge.
a suggestion, mind you, for future references:
mist upon the lake…
a mallard abeam
of the fisherman’s boat
it may have been a summer morning but be a little more expressive.
steamy reflections
morning mirage
dragonflies
humid sunrise
sweltering heat
the list could go on and on
……………………………
“focus, juxtapose, seasonal, and nature”
though more often, “in need of repair, credibility, and all too often, the pretenders”
thanks ferris
bathroom toad
i throw
a storm
passionate summer evening —
bird in full voice
from the darkness
–
crumbs of bread
behind the fishing boat-
manna for wild ducks
winter noon–
where yesterday
this same commute
this same duck bobs