enjoying autumn stillness
the measured clatter
of my clogs
Published by
john tiong chunghoo
i won honourable mention for the first takashi hoshino award and two honourable mentions and one merit poem in the new year kukai organised by the World Haiku Club recently. i am a regular participant of the shiki monthly kukai. my works have been published around the world such as poetry sharing journal, voicesnet.com, heron's nest, asahi shimbun, mainichi shimbun, yomiuri shimbun, sakura anthology, free times among many others. readers are welcome to read my poems at postpoems.com and poetry-today.com and to leave their messages. View all posts by john tiong chunghoo
I really like this John but if it were mine I would drop the ‘enjoying’, because your enjoyment is implied by the mention of ‘autumn stillness’. great stuff!
snowflakes fall
overcoming winter silence …
sigh
lonely for her…
the old hound fetches
my wife’s fleece slippers
winter remembrance
over cup of blue mountain coffee —
summer chill
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