rolling on its back
in a freshly mown paddock
a white horse

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Patricia Prime

Patricia has recently retired from teaching after 30 years, and now devotes some time to the reading recovery programme at her local school. She is the co-editor of the New Zealand haiku magazine Kokako and reviews editor of the online magazine Stylus. She writes short stories, poetry, reviews and articles, and likes to write collaborative poems with other poets. Contact Patricia: pprime at ihug.co.nz.

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  1. Bob, don’t think you need the “lucent moon”. Suggest:

    summer moon
    silent and still
    uncountable stars

  2. kind lady,
    this particular thin-cloud night, my choice of “lucent” was to reflect it’s shining and translucency; through “lucent”, i aimed for a broader defining.

    full moon
    my thoughts at midnight …
    hanging low

  3. lost glasses –
    in the window
    atop my head

    the mockingbird’s feather
    pale in comparison —
    to the blue jay’s

  4. sunset —
    stormy tropical morning
    palm fronds expose green fruit

    sad, basho’s banana tree never knew the wonders of bearing fruit

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