saturday morning
biking to the park
the click of marbles
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Carol Raisfeld
Carol Raisfeld lives in Long Beach, New York. She was Director of WHChaikumultimedia and has served as Multimedia Editor for World Haiku Review, moderator for WHClovehaiku, Associate Editor and Haiga Editor for Simply Haiku and a member of the editorial board of Modern Haiga. Carol's poetry, art and photography appear worldwide in print, online journals and anthologies.
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12 thoughts on “”
before dawn
languishing rooster crow —
nameless day
before dawn
languishing rooster crow —
nameless day
saturday morning
park full of five-day week
young
making breakfast
after making love
Saturday morning
call of the locomotive
echoing
the bicyclists whistle
Another poignant ‘ku from you…I can see the boys shooting marbles and hear the drop of the stone on asphalt as the girls “hopscotch”!
Nice one, Carol!
jogging path —
six turtles sunning
on a log
I agree with Mixx… a great ‘ku! I can see and I can heard everything… Thank you so much!
river sunlight
the smell of tugboats
and blossoms
martin
a rattle
of coins, he bows
his gratitude
don’t know how you could have heard those
marbles click while riding a bicycle, but
then some things must be taken on faith.
marbles…
the class clown rolls out
his glass eye
After a sleepless night,
in the end a daydream:
Saturday again
sea parting–
commuter traffic gives way
for the red ambulance