I like that one, Ed. It weaves all the senses together just like the experience in many beautiful cathedrals. Reply
Beautiful Margaret,I loved how your poem flowed together.The 5/7/5 haiku system was there to me that’s a plus. {The skies a prism,} {It looks like a cathedral,} {Bursting with colors.} Take Care,Darleen Reply
cathedral window–
better seen from the inside
to appreciate
cathedral
flashbulb
ejaculations
the color
of incense
stained glass
I like that one, Ed. It weaves all the senses together just like the experience in many beautiful cathedrals.
this is wonderful
kitchen window-
single blue rose ‘gainst her cheek
glisten by tears
lovely
kitchen window-
single blue rose
‘gainst her cheek
glisten by tear
Beautiful Margaret,I loved how your poem flowed together.The 5/7/5 haiku system was there to me that’s a plus.
{The skies a prism,}
{It looks like a cathedral,}
{Bursting with colors.}
Take Care,Darleen
Hi Margaret,
This haiku is as beautiful and clear as the sunbeam.loved it.
hole in the blocked wall-
a tuft of feather
this sparrow adds to the nest