spinner, there’s nothing new under the sun; newness is in that which is being seen by a person for the first time, though experienced many times previously by others.
if we searched far enough, pass our first encounter, we shouldn’t be surprised to see (it) having been done times before, even word for word.
There seems to be an interesting sequence to my little haiku – I will follow this trail (the best haikus are absent of their author, even if in the first person?).
NOTE: ‘chaffinch’ is an anonym of mine (of course:)
I’m under great impression.
This is the thing I’ve been trying to say all my life.
A moment that goes on and on.
Truly striking ku!
A delightful haiku.Enjoyed.
spinner, there’s nothing new under the sun; newness is in that which is being seen by a person for the first time, though experienced many times previously by others.
if we searched far enough, pass our first encounter, we shouldn’t be surprised to see (it) having been done times before, even word for word.
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no reflection, chaffinch
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racing pass
greying clouds…
the snow moon
spring lake –
only my song
disturbs the wind
-chaffinch
There seems to be an interesting sequence to my little haiku – I will follow this trail (the best haikus are absent of their author, even if in the first person?).
NOTE: ‘chaffinch’ is an anonym of mine (of course:)
Wow! Great!
Oh, I really love this one!!!!
Dirk says it all for me. Nicely done.
Collin
summer lake –
only my campfire
disturbs the stars
autumn lake
only my memory
disturbs the trees
..This could drive a person nuts!