his brother’s new bike–
looking down
at his tricycle

Published by

Tim Jamieson

I am Canadian, born and raised in the province of Saskatchewan and living in Winnipeg, Manitoba. I first began writing haiku in 1983, and have had work accepted in Canada, the U.S., Japan, Australia, New Zealand, England, Ireland and Belgium.

3 thoughts on “”

  1. that`s life…

    and one day this tricycle driver will be owner of a wonderful bike and…

    a good senryĆ»!

  2. tim, a wave of (christmas past) rushed over me. being familiar with the “older brother’s new bike”; prior to my being capable of riding a bike, i longingly admired the shiny red bike my older brother had received for christmas; equally well, with the cap pistols i received, i remember my tears…

    yet, more memorable were the tears i shed when my brother died

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