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  1. Very perceptive, Juliusz, and very nicely done.

    bare walls
    learning how much of ours
    was hers

  2. very nice haiku -great response Ed.
    sometimes it gets expensive (emotionally) figuring out what belongs to whom

  3. Such a truly point beautifully stated. It makes me think about how our environment helps to define who we are, even to ourselves.

  4. Very good, Juliusz. I have know those bare walls. Sometimes they are happy, sometimes sad.

    Ed, a very telling response.

  5. Very true, and most beautifully expressed. There’s something about bare walls, whether in public places or in our own homes, that magnifies distances, both visually and emotionally.

    ~Megan

    bare walls
    nothing to display
    but your absence

    bare walls
    our parting words
    echo

  6. A haunting haiku that is incredibly powerful. This really touched me, and I suspect that many people are familiar with those bare walls. WOW!

  7. thanks Juliusz; keep writing

    ed.
    bare walls–
    much of mine
    was hers

    jem, faults included, define who we are

    so true felica, judith.
    retrieving things past–
    staring
    at bare walls

    josh, my idle mind creates what i’d not seen before

    anthony, what’s free; but there was a time in my life, the sixties, love was said to be free. lol

    cross field of clover–
    summer ends

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