falling down
onto rush hour traffic
seagull feathers
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Alan Summers
Alan's haiku and poetry is published in over 60 anthologies, and a number of languages. He regularly reads, performs, and workshops from venues as diverse as possible including shop windows; inner city rainforests; cliff tops; to the more orthodox places...on occasion. His website is: http://www.withwords.org.uk
Contact: alan at withwords dot org dot uk
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“down” is very nice, Alan. Nicely caught entirely.
“down” is very nice, Alan. Nicely caught entirely.
well done!
BRIGIT
swan’s down ~
smell snow
on the wind
Excellent images and a wonderful haiku.
I am always inspired by your haiku, Alan
falling down
onto rush hour traffic
seagull feathers
The lovely rhythm mirrors that of a falling feather…Nice, Alan.
Really nice, Alan. Love the surprise.
I echo Nancy, Alan.
Enjoyed.
I enjoyed the double meaning inherent in “falling down”. ;-)
Nice one, Alan…
I like the two different movements.
And then I find myself wondering if the
seagull was in a rush too!
;)
Lary
bouncing leaf
basho’s bird in flight–
raindrops this night
Thanks everyone for the comments, I’m humbled.
Wonderful ´ku. Thanks.