in one breath the whole autumn
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Valeria Simonova-Cecon
Valeria Simonova-Cecon, Russian residing now in Cividale with her husband, Italian haijin Andrea Cecon. She lives a very calm and simple life and finds her inspiration in the beautiful nature of the North-Eastern Italy. View all posts by Valeria Simonova-Cecon
Excellent, thank you. The use of senses (time, smell and even taste) of a season in a breath is well done —
Love it!
very nice… captures the haiku moment.
Yes!
Greg, columbusmatt, thank you vey much :)
thank you. and for the one-line of it. marlene
Hi Valeria,
I love this one liner, it's succinct and it should trigger off powerful images and experiences in a good way.
Alan
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I love the simplicity and complexity all in one! Great poem
yes, it is all in one deep breath, this poem, as if together, we enter the forest alive with autumn.
hard to respond to something so lovely in its brevity without great brevity, but I don't just want to write that I love this–it's sensory exactness is enviable. bravo.
I'm moved by your kind words, thank you very much.
Exquisite.
Exquisite.
Exquisite.
This is one of the poems that show the beautifulness of the genre – so much said in just a few words…. Thanks for sharing this one :))
It's magical!
Exquisite.
Indeed very nice…:)