in one breath the whole autumn
Issue 09.1 | 7 December 2009
Excellent, thank you. The use of senses (time, smell and even taste) of a season in a breath is well done —
very nice… captures the haiku moment.
Greg, columbusmatt, thank you vey much :)
thank you. and for the one-line of it. marlene
I love this one liner, it's succinct and it should trigger off powerful images and experiences in a good way.
I love the simplicity and complexity all in one! Great poem
yes, it is all in one deep breath, this poem, as if together, we enter the forest alive with autumn.
hard to respond to something so lovely in its brevity without great brevity, but I don't just want to write that I love this–it's sensory exactness is enviable. bravo.
I'm moved by your kind words, thank you very much.
This is one of the poems that show the beautifulness of the genre – so much said in just a few words…. Thanks for sharing this one :))
Indeed very nice…:)
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