fall migration
the growing flock
of binoculars

First published in Mainichi Daily News, December 2007.

Published by

Deborah P Kolodji

Deborah P Kolodji moderates the Southern California Haiku Study Group, which meets monthly in Pasadena, CA at the Pacific Asia Museum. A former president of the Science Fiction Poetry Association, she is the California Regional Coordinator of the Haiku Society of America. She has published over 800 haiku.

9 thoughts on “”

  1. oooooh I love the surprise in this one!… and the switch of attention… to the means: not the viewed ( fall migration) of birds…but the viewer(s) (lovely use of) (flock/ of binoculars)… dylan's poem does that too, the pointer getting all the attention of the child's eye…

  2. Deborah,
    Through this and your activity on Facebook I am getting a new appreciation of your haiku work! Thank you!

  3. Deborah,
    Through this and your activity on Facebook I am getting a new appreciation of your haiku work! Thank you!

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