So much suggested in this one, I love it. I immediately imagined leaves the shape of a guitar pick. Also the “two” is suggestive… he is not alone, a duet… of hearts… (the one who is looking?) The “headstone” is not seen till the end, and it gives the scene a deep feeling and one reads again, viewing the complete, evocative picture.
So much suggested in this one, I love it. I immediately imagined leaves the shape of a guitar pick. Also the “two” is suggestive… he is not alone, a duet… of hearts… (the one who is looking?) The “headstone” is not seen till the end, and it gives the scene a deep feeling and one reads again, viewing the complete, evocative picture.
December 16th, 2009 at 9:58 am
So much suggested in this one, I love it. I immediately imagined leaves the shape of a guitar pick. Also the “two” is suggestive… he is not alone, a duet… of hearts… (the one who is looking?) The “headstone” is not seen till the end, and it gives the scene a deep feeling and one reads again, viewing the complete, evocative picture.
December 16th, 2009 at 11:02 am
Lovely, moving, and I also admire Wilson?s comment above.
December 16th, 2009 at 2:26 pm
g'day Charles
This is a very emotive poem. Speaks to me so well.
peace and love
December 16th, 2009 at 5:50 pm
This is a beautiful and very moving haiku. Intense depth that just keeps resonating. Nice!!
December 16th, 2009 at 5:58 pm
So much suggested in this one, I love it. I immediately imagined leaves the shape of a guitar pick. Also the “two” is suggestive… he is not alone, a duet… of hearts… (the one who is looking?) The “headstone” is not seen till the end, and it gives the scene a deep feeling and one reads again, viewing the complete, evocative picture.
December 16th, 2009 at 7:02 pm
Lovely, moving, and I also admire Wilson?s comment above.
December 16th, 2009 at 10:26 pm
g'day Charles
This is a very emotive poem. Speaks to me so well.
peace and love
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