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He is young.
He could be younger.
His hands shake.
Even propped on the bar.
His nights:
he stands so ready:
his face: a mark:
the close of claws.
And passed:
after a pause.
He is young.
He could be younger.
His hands shake.
Even propped on the bar.
His nights:
he stands so ready:
his face: a mark:
the close of claws.
And passed:
after a pause.
January 21st, 2010 at 5:17 pm
Intense, giving the reader something to think upon, bringing one – wanting to read your words again. Nice work!
April 26th, 2010 at 11:49 pm
where ARE you? and who is john ashbery? do hope you're fine, fine, fine…….love, bp