I pause to watch
the moon riding the clouds
the boy tugs my hand
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Bob Brill
Bob Brill's poems have appeared in Simply Haiku, Prune Juice, 3Lights Gallery, 3Lights Journal, Aphelion, The Battered Suitcase, Frogpond and Willows Wept Review. Awaiting publication at Atlas Poetica and Magnapoets. He is the featured senryu poet in the Autumn 2009 issue of Simply Haiku.
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has reached the age of observation, he pauses
for the deep act of moon-watching. The boy,
like all boys, is impatient and wants to move
along. All of life process here, as in the best haiku.
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This is sabi/wabi at its most forceful: the father
has reached the age of observation, he pauses
for the deep act of moon-watching. The boy,
like all boys, is impatient and wants to move
along. All of life process here, as in the best haiku.
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I delay to observe
the moon riding the mists
the kid pulls my hand
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