Nice one, RaV…. ;-) I like the way you imply that you were a bit 'thick', too, as it adds a subtle touch of self-deprecating humour, though I don't for a moment believe you were or are at all 'thick'.
I'm very pleased it works right. Thank you so much for all your kind words.
Lorin, I guess you considerably overrate my haiku skills. ;-) In fact, I'm a skinny person. :-)
Warm greetings.
One day an ant may cross my own grave, just as it crosses the stump of the dead tree. But in the meantime it takes me back in time to memories of childhood… marvelous poem!
July 9th, 2010 at 9:29 pm
A very nice haiku. Quite a recognizable picture is in here!
July 9th, 2010 at 9:55 pm
Wow~! Thank you so very much~!
July 9th, 2010 at 10:00 pm
Lovely. Vivid. Great connection between human and nature.
July 10th, 2010 at 1:02 am
Nice one, RaV…. ;-) I like the way you imply that you were a bit 'thick', too, as it adds a subtle touch of self-deprecating humour, though I don't for a moment believe you were or are at all 'thick'.
July 10th, 2010 at 4:42 am
Very nice…ants were much more a part of our childhood….
July 9th, 2010 at 10:14 pm
very beautiful!!
sounds like it is talking about impermanence n interconnectedness from buddha’s line of thought :)
very nice work.
best wishes!
July 10th, 2010 at 11:32 am
Very biting. Very moving. I like it
Journey of man. Journey of ant. All one!
July 10th, 2010 at 3:08 pm
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July 10th, 2010 at 10:57 am
This is a really excellent haiku, both in the moment and in ongoing time. Possibly the best new thing I’ve read in some time.
July 11th, 2010 at 1:59 am
A lovely, well written haiku. The imagery is great!
July 12th, 2010 at 12:06 am
vastag fa tönkje
évgyűrűin gyerekkoromba
indul egy hangya
July 12th, 2010 at 11:33 am
I'm very pleased it works right. Thank you so much for all your kind words.
Lorin, I guess you considerably overrate my haiku skills. ;-) In fact, I'm a skinny person. :-)
Warm greetings.
July 13th, 2010 at 4:04 am
Terrific imagery; we all can relate to it.
July 13th, 2010 at 5:44 am
One day an ant may cross my own grave, just as it crosses the stump of the dead tree. But in the meantime it takes me back in time to memories of childhood… marvelous poem!
July 15th, 2010 at 6:34 pm
my
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August 2nd, 2010 at 9:07 pm
Magical!
March 7th, 2014 at 7:04 pm
Excellent writing !
September 29th, 2016 at 6:49 am
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