towpath—
a blue heron shifts
the twilight
(for Lenard D. Moore)
Previous publications: miniwords 2008 haiku contest 3rd place; Haiku Poets Central Maryland 2008 poemsheet ‘lunch break’
towpath—
a blue heron shifts
the twilight
(for Lenard D. Moore)
Previous publications: miniwords 2008 haiku contest 3rd place; Haiku Poets Central Maryland 2008 poemsheet ‘lunch break’
Lenard, Wonderful moment when time stops and there is that pause between species… Thanks, Merrill
Roberta! That was your haiku! I thought it was Lenard's … but the comment bears up… "Wonderful moment when time stops and there is that pause where two minds meet!" Wonderful…
Nicely done…
Lovely. So much image in such quite words.
Simply wonderful!
Nice one Roberta! ;-)
both subtle and striking…
striking imagery. like it!
You know somethings a good haiku when it's both fresh and new each reading. ;-)
Alan
The With Words Haiku Competition 2010: http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html
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