workday’s end a construction worker pees into the summer sun
—Dietmar Tauchner
Issue 10.2 | 23 August 2010
As an ex-construction worker I love it. Never done this myself though, or this:
warm day … the workman lunches in his wheelbarrow
Alan Summers 1. Snapshot Calendar 2005 (Snapshot Press) 2. Hermitage haiku journal, Romania ISSN 1584-6970 .
Very nice and clever…
Love it. (And yours Alan – glad to read the caveat!)
Ha! Good one, Dietmar.
and yours too, Alan!
Well written, and feeling utterly authentic!
all my best,
Alan The With Words International Online Haiku Competition 2010: http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html .
lunching workmen the sidewalk darkens under spittle
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August 23rd, 2010 at 7:06 pm
As an ex-construction worker I love it. Never done this myself though, or this:
warm day …
the workman lunches
in his wheelbarrow
Alan Summers
1. Snapshot Calendar 2005 (Snapshot Press)
2. Hermitage haiku journal, Romania ISSN 1584-6970
.
August 24th, 2010 at 1:22 am
Very nice and clever…
August 24th, 2010 at 8:35 am
Love it. (And yours Alan – glad to read the caveat!)
August 24th, 2010 at 10:52 am
Ha! Good one, Dietmar.
August 24th, 2010 at 10:53 am
and yours too, Alan!
August 29th, 2010 at 2:14 pm
Well written, and feeling utterly authentic!
all my best,
Alan
The With Words International Online Haiku Competition 2010: http://www.withwords.org.uk/comp.html
.
October 10th, 2010 at 2:02 pm
lunching workmen
the sidewalk darkens
under spittle