Wonderful ku, Jim – warmly touching (unintended pun but happy with it)
Wood, I'd classify this as a seasonless haiku, though I know there are varying views on the haiku/senryu distinction in English. As to 5-7-5, the majority of literary haiku in English have been written free-form for a couple of decades now.
I love the mood: in this haiku there's a sort of melancholy that I like very much… well done!
Was not a haiku a nature obsevastion? Not comenting in anger has 5-7-5 bit the dust also
Revisiting the scene? no ofense
Wonderful ku, Jim – warmly touching (unintended pun but happy with it)
Wood, I'd classify this as a seasonless haiku, though I know there are varying views on the haiku/senryu distinction in English. As to 5-7-5, the majority of literary haiku in English have been written free-form for a couple of decades now.
I love the suggestive passion of this one. Delightful!
(For Wood)
what is a haiku —
your wine reflects the moonlight,
mine doesn't — we drink
wow!!
Oooh. Like this a lot.
summer dusk
coupled fireflies stick to the heat