the snow
before it falls
white sun

8 Responses

  1. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Lovely and intense. I am also on a distribution that sends me a haiku by Issa every day. At first I thought yours was one of his.

  2. Alison Hedlund Says:

    Starkly beautiful image that gives me chills.

  3. angie Says:


    a soft sound
    in this quiet space
    dripping snow

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    Tight condense superbly crafted haiku.
    Alan, With Words

  5. shaheen Says:

    dripped frozen drops
    left scribble text
    on window panes

    comment plz

  6. george Says:

    thank you

  7. martin1223 Says:

    new snow
    the blueness of the sky

  8. martin1223 Says:

    new snow
    a hint of blue

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