Faster and Faster

20,000 years on average from the Sun’s core to its surface.
About 8 minutes and 18 seconds from the Sun to Moon.
One more second from the Moon to Earth.

crisp night
the shiver of moonlight
in her eyes

In a flash from her eyes to mine.

5 Responses

  1. david s Says:

    love it!

  2. @IanMcL13 Says:

    Very beautiful indeed; I took the liberty of quoting in full in my blog – Words form a Room ( – I hope that's okay, if not please let me know and I will remove it.

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  4. RaV Says:

    I'm very glad it works right. Thank you so much for all your kind words.
    @lanMcL13, I'm flattered that you like my haibun but I offered this piece to Tinywords and I believe it should be available on the Internet just here and at my personal website. So, would you be so kind and remove it from your blog?
    Warm greetings.

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