Faster and Faster

20,000 years on average from the Sun’s core to its surface.
About 8 minutes and 18 seconds from the Sun to Moon.
One more second from the Moon to Earth.

crisp night
the shiver of moonlight
in her eyes

In a flash from her eyes to mine.

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Rafał Zabratyński

Rafał Zabratyński lives in Rzeszów, Poland. He has been writing haiku and other short Japanese poetic forms since 2000. His works have been published in numerous journals and awarded in a few competitions. He also enjoys reading and watching science fiction, exploring cosmology, mountain trekking, cycling, travelling.

4 thoughts on “Faster and Faster”

  4. I'm very glad it works right. Thank you so much for all your kind words.
    @lanMcL13, I'm flattered that you like my haibun but I offered this piece to Tinywords and I believe it should be available on the Internet just here and at my personal website. So, would you be so kind and remove it from your blog?
    Warm greetings.

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