This is so nice. Great idea for Haiku. These just three lines explains so many things like its explained the beauty of moon its just like silver . Moon shines like a silver and he compared his love with Moon or also asking question to herself does he really exist. So nice poem. I can explain these three lines in so many words. Keep it up…
March 1st, 2011 at 4:49 am
Nice idea for a haiku…
March 1st, 2011 at 1:41 pm
in this dense fog
your smile
with a particle of truth
March 16th, 2011 at 5:17 pm
I love this. A really good quality modern haiku.
Alan, With Words
May 22nd, 2013 at 12:28 am
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November 18th, 2016 at 9:33 am
This is so nice. Great idea for Haiku. These just three lines explains so many things like its explained the beauty of moon its just like silver . Moon shines like a silver and he compared his love with Moon or also asking question to herself does he really exist. So nice poem. I can explain these three lines in so many words. Keep it up…