I like this poem, but I like mine too. I could not get my attempt published here, but I got it published in a small press print magazine in the U.K. called Presence in issue #45. I recommend them.
from her dark hip the moon’s curve
Still, TINYWORDS is the best idea that ever came down the net. TINYWORDS is the first, as far as I know, to spread haiku digitally through your cell phone and now through most portable electronic devices throughout the world. What an original idea!_