the curve
of her hips—

7 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

    Enjoyed! ;-)


  2. Mary Says:

    …nicely realized…

  3. Dr R.K.Singh Says:

    This is lovely.

  4. martin1223 Says:

    I like this poem, but I like mine too. I could not get my attempt published here, but I got it published in a small press print magazine in the U.K. called Presence in issue #45. I recommend them.

    from her dark hip the moon’s curve

    Still, TINYWORDS is the best idea that ever came down the net. TINYWORDS is the first, as far as I know, to spread haiku digitally through your cell phone and now through most portable electronic devices throughout the world. What an original idea!_

  5. Helen Buckingham Says:

    I LOVE this.

  6. Seren Fargo Says:

    Very very nice.

  7. shaheen Says:

    marvellous lines

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