unboxed letters what I missed between the lines
—Christopher Pickslay
Issue 11.2 | 20 July 2011
Yeah, ni-i-ice. Real succinct Christopher.
Fresh original first line, love the whole haiku!
Alan
between the folds of her letter spider’s silk
i think the folds are wide enough for spider work
I really like this one. There are so many possibilities for the reader to imagine is in those letters and what was missed.
dont know whether the folds of an old letter could be that much wide enough for spider's workshop
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July 20th, 2011 at 6:07 pm
Yeah, ni-i-ice. Real succinct Christopher.
July 21st, 2011 at 4:39 pm
Fresh original first line, love the whole haiku!
Alan
August 2nd, 2011 at 4:42 am
between the folds of her letter spider’s silk
September 26th, 2011 at 2:31 am
i think the folds are wide enough for spider work
September 1st, 2011 at 7:37 pm
I really like this one. There are so many possibilities for the reader to imagine is in those letters and what was missed.
September 24th, 2011 at 1:19 pm
dont know whether the folds of an old letter could be that much wide enough for spider's workshop