in the park pigeons peck in front of empty benches
—Jay Friedenberg
Issue 11.2 | 9 August 2011
Nicely done: I really enjoyed its simplicity…
Many thanks, I hope to have more posted soon.
–Jay
A keen and quietly stated observation, as if not to disturb them. I am sharing this poem at word pond. Thank you, poet and tinywords.
Thanks, please feel free to share!
late summer day shadows grow longer
pigeon cooling my mail box is empty
shorter days longer shadows
As a horror story..
In the park pigeons peck in front of empty benches amid buckles and shoes the indigestible parts
: )
deserted park a tired butterfly settled on my shining shoes
tiny words admn thanks for your consideration
we still poles apart pigeons in the above cornice beak to beak
A very vivid image.
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August 9th, 2011 at 10:41 am
Nicely done: I really enjoyed its simplicity…
March 14th, 2012 at 6:42 pm
Many thanks, I hope to have more posted soon.
–Jay
August 10th, 2011 at 7:02 am
A keen and quietly stated observation, as if not to disturb them. I am sharing this poem at word pond. Thank you, poet and tinywords.
March 14th, 2012 at 6:41 pm
Thanks, please feel free to share!
–Jay
August 10th, 2011 at 10:44 am
late summer day
shadows grow longer
August 10th, 2011 at 2:19 pm
pigeon cooling
my mail box
is empty
August 11th, 2011 at 5:49 pm
shorter days
longer shadows
August 31st, 2011 at 10:15 pm
As a horror story..
In the park
pigeons peck in front of
empty benches
amid buckles and shoes
the indigestible parts
: )
September 24th, 2011 at 12:24 pm
deserted park
a tired butterfly
settled on my shining shoes
September 24th, 2011 at 12:26 pm
tiny words admn thanks for your consideration
September 26th, 2011 at 12:57 am
we still poles apart
pigeons in the above cornice
beak to beak
January 5th, 2017 at 6:29 am
A very vivid image.