white water rafting we spin around our laughter
Previously published in Mayfly, Summer 2008
—Kala Ramesh
Issue 11.2 | 10 August 2011
That's really nice!
wonderfully joyful – captures the moment so vividly – great work, as ever, Kala
I've been white water rafting once, and this captures the experience perfectly.
Beautiful work, Kala! Full of joy!
g'day kala
love the energy in this!
peace and love B
Thanks a ton to all who've taken the time to send your responses. This took place in Bali in 2007! I'm truly happy you were able to relate to this poem.
a happy me . . . _kala :)
Nice one!
Alan
Fun! — especially effective with the indention.
Heh… My rafting experience…
White water rafting we compete to swallow the most river : )
dry reed bundle making a raft melon theft
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August 10th, 2011 at 12:10 pm
That's really nice!
August 10th, 2011 at 12:10 pm
wonderfully joyful – captures the moment so vividly – great work, as ever, Kala
August 10th, 2011 at 12:34 pm
I've been white water rafting once, and this captures the experience perfectly.
August 10th, 2011 at 1:37 pm
Beautiful work, Kala! Full of joy!
August 10th, 2011 at 4:01 pm
g'day kala
love the energy in this!
peace and love
B
August 10th, 2011 at 9:30 pm
Thanks a ton to all who've taken the time to send your responses.
This took place in Bali in 2007!
I'm truly happy you were able to relate to this poem.
a happy me . . .
_kala :)
August 11th, 2011 at 5:25 pm
Nice one!
Alan
August 22nd, 2011 at 5:46 pm
Fun! — especially effective with the indention.
August 31st, 2011 at 10:09 pm
Heh… My rafting experience…
White water rafting
we compete
to swallow the most river : )
September 24th, 2011 at 12:18 pm
dry reed bundle
making a raft
melon theft
August 19th, 2013 at 12:34 am
see by chloe