Jay Friedenberg is a member of the Haiku Society of America and Spring Street Haiku Group in New York City. He is currently serving as Associate Editor for frogpond, the journal for the Haiku Society of America. He has had his work accepted in numerous U.S. and international journals and is the winner of multiple awards and honorable mentions in haiku contests.
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And, like a rock has a "place." I love the tension this sets up, the way it exposes–gently–the tendency some of us have (well, I speak for myself) to "tweak" things, as if perfection only comes from tweaking. Lovely, just lovely.
wabi sabi :-)
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Simple but nicely done…
One person’s ‘out’ might be another person’s ‘in’ and therefore this brings insight into the viewer. Lots to reflect on here.
And, like a rock has a "place." I love the tension this sets up, the way it exposes–gently–the tendency some of us have (well, I speak for myself) to "tweak" things, as if perfection only comes from tweaking. Lovely, just lovely.
In the maple shade
red leaves fall on raked lines;
what child wrote this verse?
Perfect : )
lovely this one rock has made all the difference