my journey begins:
a few snowflakes
flutter in the breeze

5 Responses

  1. Marilyn Hazelton Says:

    This is wonderful!

  2. Jeffrey Winke Says:

    Nicely wrought!

  3. Dru Philippou Says:

    Very original, Charles. An image that lingers.

    Dru Philippou

  4. snowbirdpress Says:

    looking back at the tracks
    slush turning to spring mud

    I love your haiku, Charlie… it's funny how the path looks so undefined in the beginning, and how, after all the drifts and shoveling, suddenly there's spring. You've left the whole journey for each of us to fill in as we go…

  5. Marjorie Says:

    I like the ambiguity…snowflakes fluttering just as we, at some time in our lives flutter in the breeze.

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