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1. pbergonzi Says:
   December 19th, 2011 at 10:42 am

   Cool.

2. barbara a taylor Says:
   December 19th, 2011 at 2:59 pm

   g'day Don

   I love this, so familiar to me

   peace and love

3. Vida Says:
   December 19th, 2011 at 3:37 pm

   I really like this, Don!

4. jcorpe Says:
   December 19th, 2011 at 4:40 pm

   I have a slug trail haiku I never could get right, but then, I didn't think of "slime trail", lol! Makes me miss the west coast. Great one, Don. :)

5. snowbirdpress Says:
   December 19th, 2011 at 7:53 pm

   Oh, My! Don … how our memories come through "glinting"… It's a good thing we can let all the slime fall away…Many thanks, Merrill

6. donnafleischer Says:
   December 20th, 2011 at 9:02 am

   "Issa's Untidy Hut" truly, (and mt fuji slowly, slowly. Thank you, Don, for this gem.

7. lilliputreview Says:
   December 21st, 2011 at 9:41 am

   Thanks all. I really appreciate the enthusiasm. Don

8. Alan Summers Says:
   December 29th, 2011 at 3:34 am

   Slime trail—
   glancing back at
   the glinting

   —Don Wentworth

   Good use of alliteration/consonance (g and gl). Another haiku with several layers for the close reader to be rewarded.

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