on an old tire swing
grief gives way


6 Responses

  1. Nessa Says:

    Wow. This is nice.

  2. Alan Summers Says:

    Dreamy and terribly poignant.


  3. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    Yes, beautiful.

    her suffering is past
    winter sky

  4. Helen Buckingham Says:

    So strange the way grief catches you off-guard. Well captured.

  5. Marjorie Buettner Says:

    wonderful haiku, Lucus!

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:


    another winter . . .
    my father's garden seat
    still creaking

    A Hundred Gourds 1:3

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