leaf in the wind . . .
for one breath I imagine
an end like this
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Roman Lyakhovetsky
Originally from Russia, Roman Lyakhovetsky now lives in Israel. His haiku appeared in various journals including Modern Haiku, Frogpond, Heron's Nest and Tinywords.
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Subtle and powerful at the same time! Just lovely. Our group ( in Bend, Oregon) is called One Breath Poets, so this had an additional layer of 'aha' for me!
Surprising. And nice!
Very interesting… I like it!
Thanks Andrea I'm glad you like it!
Beautiful – my breath caught when I read it.
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
effective, throat tightening.
Thank you! I really appreciate it!
Beautiful haiku. Goes right to the heart of things.
I really like this haiku…very ethereal and caught my breath as well.
Thanks! I appreciate your kind words!
Beautiful poem—startling image!
Thanks for your kind words!
A very good one, Roman! Congratulations!
Subtle and powerful at the same time! Just lovely. Our group ( in Bend, Oregon) is called One Breath Poets, so this had an additional layer of 'aha' for me!
Thank you! What a coincidence :)
Beautiful imagery.
Thank you!
Thanks Norman, I'm excited you like it!
Yes, the last line is surprising. I like it. :)
marion
Thanks, Marion!