between islands
a ferry dissolving
in the mist

5 Responses

  1. Brandon Bordelon Says:

    the mist
    making islands
    of us

  2. Annette Makino Says:

    So evocative! Here's one from Arcata:

    between redwoods
    hills dissolving
    in the fog

  3. Alan Summers Says:


    the in-between season
    I follow the Mogami River
    by riceboat

    n.b. A small gap appears between Summer and Autumn if the tsukutsukubôshi cicadas
    at Sumadera are heard to ‘sing’ (which I did).

    Alan Summers
    Publications credits: World Haiku Review Japan Article Vending machines and cicadas (2003); Travelogue on World Haiku Festival 2002 (Akita International Haiku Network, Part 1, 2010); The In-Between Season (With Words Pamphlet Series 2012)

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Love the use of dissolving here.

  5. Chaff Cutter Says:

    Read after this blog i relised the mist is so great .

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