listening to the game
on the riding mower
long drive?to deep center
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Garry Eaton
Garry Eaton is a retired, jack-of-all-trades Canadian on the west coast of British Columbia. He has been practicing haiku since 2006. He is interested in the way the discipline is refocusing his attention on, and improving his appreciation of the gift of life.
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Highly enjoyable haiku.
Alan
LOVE how pun and metaphor carry the same magic. Thank you for this. Makes me think of my father who loved pun and poetry, sports and mowing. Thankis!
This one got a laugh, as well as catching a human moment.
I love this one – it's college football mania here in the southern US, so this one is quite appropriate!
Very 'sound and vision', Garry. Lovely.
marion
Always love a baseball haiku, and with a nice pastoral, retro touch.
Wonderful work Garry
Thanks all.