listening to the game on the riding mower long drive to deep center
—Garry Eaton
Issue 13.2 | 2 October 2013
Highly enjoyable haiku.
Alan
LOVE how pun and metaphor carry the same magic. Thank you for this. Makes me think of my father who loved pun and poetry, sports and mowing. Thankis!
This one got a laugh, as well as catching a human moment.
I love this one – it's college football mania here in the southern US, so this one is quite appropriate!
Very 'sound and vision', Garry. Lovely.
marion
Always love a baseball haiku, and with a nice pastoral, retro touch.
Wonderful work Garry
Thanks all.
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October 2nd, 2013 at 9:44 am
Highly enjoyable haiku.
Alan
October 2nd, 2013 at 9:48 am
LOVE how pun and metaphor carry the same magic. Thank you for this. Makes me think of my father who loved pun and poetry, sports and mowing. Thankis!
October 2nd, 2013 at 10:02 am
This one got a laugh, as well as catching a human moment.
October 2nd, 2013 at 1:06 pm
I love this one – it's college football mania here in the southern US, so this one is quite appropriate!
October 4th, 2013 at 5:56 am
Very 'sound and vision', Garry. Lovely.
marion
October 5th, 2013 at 10:08 am
Always love a baseball haiku, and with a nice pastoral, retro touch.
October 6th, 2013 at 8:15 pm
Wonderful work Garry
October 15th, 2013 at 5:17 pm
Thanks all.