by stone, the river
—Mark E. Brager
Issue 13.3 | 15 January 2014
The rhythm of this haiku is very evocative. When I read it, the voice of the poem goes up at the end, as if widening into infinity. All with 6 short words!
Thank you very much Sheila! This was a bit of an experiment for me in terms of rhythm and word placement. I'm so glad it worked for you…
Mark E Brager
I like the succinct choices of word placement here. A fine six-word haiku.
Thank you very much Alan…
A very interesting one, despite so few words. Nice.
Thank you Marion…
Thanks Mark. This one opens to time and story as if water.
Thank you …
remains mysterious while seeming apropos
Thank you Glenn…
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