stone
by stone, the river
widens
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Mark E. Brager
Mark E. Brager lives with his wife and son in Columbia, MD, just outside of Washington, DC, where he works as a public affairs executive. His poems have appeared in haijinx, Prune Juice, Haiku Pix Review, The Heron's Nest, Notes from the Gean, and DailyHaiku.
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The rhythm of this haiku is very evocative. When I read it, the voice of the poem goes up at the end, as if widening into infinity. All with 6 short words!
Thank you very much Sheila! This was a bit of an experiment for me in terms of rhythm and word placement. I'm so glad it worked for you…
stone
by stone, the river
widens
Mark E Brager
I like the succinct choices of word placement here. A fine six-word haiku.
warm regards,
Alan
Thank you very much Alan…
A very interesting one, despite so few words. Nice.
marion
Thank you Marion…
Thanks Mark. This one opens to time and story as if water.
P.
Thank you …
remains mysterious while seeming apropos
Thank you Glenn…