apple slices— our last words in the knife?s blade
—Maureen Virchau
Issue 13.3 | 30 January 2014
slicing the air sharp words
Excellent haiku, very original!
zombie debt– the practised slice of a bread knife
Alan Summers Publications credits: Haiku News (Vol. 1 No. 41 2012); Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)
Thank you so much for your kind words, Alan. :-) I thoroughly enjoy your haiku, and I find it to be extremely original, as well.
With gratitude, Maureen
Thank Maureen,
It's surprising what imagery we conjure with knives, literally and metaphorically.
Your kind words very much appreciated, and thank you for your haiku again.
warm regards,
Alan
What a powerful verse this is. There are so many ways to read this haiku–the imagery is just so rich.
~ Mary
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January 30th, 2014 at 1:22 pm
slicing
the air
sharp words
May 5th, 2014 at 2:46 pm
Excellent haiku, very original!
zombie debt–
the practised slice
of a bread knife
Alan Summers
Publications credits:
Haiku News (Vol. 1 No. 41 2012); Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)
May 28th, 2014 at 8:42 am
Thank you so much for your kind words, Alan. :-)
I thoroughly enjoy your haiku, and I find it to be extremely original, as well.
With gratitude,
Maureen
May 29th, 2014 at 1:42 am
Thank Maureen,
It's surprising what imagery we conjure with knives, literally and metaphorically.
Your kind words very much appreciated, and thank you for your haiku again.
warm regards,
Alan
April 23rd, 2017 at 12:27 am
What a powerful verse this is. There are so many ways to read this haiku–the imagery is just so rich.
~ Mary