wallpaper stripping the years of her life
Issue 14.1 | 21 May 2014
Susan – have long appreciated your work . "Wedgwood" is a favorite as it brings fond memories of my own mother…
Lovely! And I return often to your World Haiku award "falling leaves/how will I know/my time has come.
Thank you so much for your kind comments. I really appreciate hearing from each of you. Delighted todiscover that you recall some other haiku of mine, as well. That's very rewarding. Susan
Beautiful poem, Susan. And beautifully executed.
I particularly like how the horizontal structure of this work matches the march of time. And how through your absence of punctuation you create a sense of deliberate ambiguity, to match the existential musings which I read as the heart of the poem.
Many thanks for sharing it with us.
I love the sound of this one, Susan. It feels 'determined', somehow. This might be someone making a new start after a relationship has ended.
More thanks! Glad that 'wedgwood' works for you, T. Johnson.
I appreciate your comments, Strider. Ambiguous, yes, so glad you like it.
Thanks for sharing your interpretation, Marion! I'm happy this one is working for you.
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