over the neighbour’s fence …
Issue 14.1 | 2 June 2014
Your poem evokes a beautiful image. For some reason it makes me recall lilacs seen as a child, although there never was such a licac on our property.
the empty lot
my neighbor labors and leaves
Thanks, Merrill. I'm glad mu haiku struck a chord with you. HB
Marie Shimane, I love your haiku! It works so beautifully! HB
Very evocative poem. Love love love it.
Alison Hedlund, Thanks so much! HB
Magical haiku, Heather.
I love the ambiguity you evoke – are the lilacs escaping the neighbour's yard, or do they carry our own yearnings to flee?
I also love this one. Brought a smile to my face. :)
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