last leaves –
his white breath dissolves
in the garden
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Bouwe Brouwer
Bouwe Brouwer (08-03-1977) is a primary school teacher who lives
in Sneek, The Netherlands. He's interested in haiku, haibun, short stories and photography. Website: www.bouwebrouwer.com / www.instagram.com/bouwebrouwer
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Love! Love! Love!
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last leaves –
his white breath dissolves
in the garden
—BOUWE BROUWER
I like the deft touch of negative space in the haiku. There's enough for the reader to develop their own story from the author's narrative.
Quite a different haiku:
Sirocco winds-
the leaves spinning out
of butterfly dreams
Alan Summers
pub. Scope 2014
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Very nicely done, Bouwe!
Ah! This is so touching.
marion,
Thanks everyone!
The spellings used in thesis writing must be written in the English of United Kingdom instead of United States. The English of United States is very informal to be used in the context of thesis writing and hence should be avoided.