"Circling" is a wonderful first line! Yes, there is a sense of completeness, satisfaction even. Until, of course, we look up and move on to the next activity. And we're circling again.
This is great Tish. Yesterday I commented on the power of the perfect descriptive word. Today we enjoy the reverse. You've deliberately eschewed the obvious and therefore perhaps clichéd season word, but have allowed us to "word find" it for ourselves. As Julie says, this gives its own satisfaction, and we the reader actually share the emotional experience of the activity described. I really enjoyed this. Brilliantly done.
I love how this one, for me, alludes to the things we search for in life, and the discoveries we make along the way, the endings and beginnings, the cycle of life. A beautiful mix of meanings. :)
September 23rd, 2014 at 10:50 am
"Circling" is a wonderful first line! Yes, there is a sense of completeness, satisfaction even. Until, of course, we look up and move on to the next activity. And we're circling again.
summer's end in Ohio
we follow it
south
September 23rd, 2014 at 3:03 pm
This is great Tish. Yesterday I commented on the power of the perfect descriptive word. Today we enjoy the reverse. You've deliberately eschewed the obvious and therefore perhaps clichéd season word, but have allowed us to "word find" it for ourselves. As Julie says, this gives its own satisfaction, and we the reader actually share the emotional experience of the activity described. I really enjoyed this. Brilliantly done.
Strider
September 23rd, 2014 at 8:10 pm
Really shiny tiny words :)
September 24th, 2014 at 8:16 am
I love how this one, for me, alludes to the things we search for in life, and the discoveries we make along the way, the endings and beginnings, the cycle of life. A beautiful mix of meanings. :)
September 26th, 2014 at 2:34 am
Yes, circling is an inspired choice of verb here.
marion
October 20th, 2015 at 12:40 am
Yes
October 25th, 2015 at 6:42 pm
I don't know but I liked the place here. Bazinga!
February 17th, 2016 at 8:11 pm
tnx
molenapp.com
May 27th, 2016 at 3:51 am
Kewl you should come up with that. Exeltlenc!
November 16th, 2016 at 3:42 am
Thanks for sharing .. liked it (y)