crumbs on her lips the secret’s out
—Edna Cabcabin Moran
Issue 14.2 | 5 November 2014
I love this, on a diet so it particularly resonates with me. I am impressed how very few words can bring powerful images to mind.
Love this….. Congratulations Edna! Well done!
Love this too! Thanks for sharing it here. .
Norah
Love it._
Well done, Edna! So happy to see your work here on tinywords! :)
best i've seen in a long time
Hahahaha – calorie counting at the minute, so this really resonates! Thank you for sharing :)
marion
Impressively short and comical – the diet plan didn't work out too well it seems!
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November 5th, 2014 at 11:35 am
I love this, on a diet so it particularly resonates with me. I am impressed how very few words can bring powerful images to mind.
November 5th, 2014 at 3:32 pm
Love this….. Congratulations Edna! Well done!
November 5th, 2014 at 6:18 pm
Love this too! Thanks for sharing it here.
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Norah
November 6th, 2014 at 3:34 pm
Love it._
November 7th, 2014 at 6:09 am
Well done, Edna! So happy to see your work here on tinywords! :)
November 12th, 2014 at 9:34 am
best i've seen in a long time
November 20th, 2014 at 1:35 am
Hahahaha – calorie counting at the minute, so this really resonates! Thank you for sharing :)
marion
December 7th, 2014 at 9:35 pm
Impressively short and comical – the diet plan didn't work out too well it seems!