Lovely, Chen-ou. I like the contract between darkness and light and love 'spangles of sunlight' – which suggests hope for the year to come – but I guess it could also refer to dizziness from a New Year's Eve party! :)
A lovely image, really like the poem! This is so an everyday situation, though it gets a special meaning for the New Year morning being a first morning of the year and a nice time to start new things…
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A well caught last line capturing that special early light of the day, and it's bouncing around everything including the teaspoon if you were adding sugar. :)
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February 19th, 2015 at 8:37 am
Lovely, Chen-ou. I like the contract between darkness and light and love 'spangles of sunlight' – which suggests hope for the year to come – but I guess it could also refer to dizziness from a New Year's Eve party! :)
marion
February 19th, 2015 at 8:43 am
How lovely to read on this cold morning!
February 19th, 2015 at 9:35 am
Where I live it would have to be a late morning for a glimpse of sunlight on New Year's, but I still like the sentiment of the poem.
February 19th, 2015 at 1:15 pm
A lovely image, really like the poem! This is so an everyday situation, though it gets a special meaning for the New Year morning being a first morning of the year and a nice time to start new things…
February 19th, 2015 at 8:22 pm
Lovely haiku with juxtaposition. I read it twice and could discover the beauty of art-of-words!
February 20th, 2015 at 2:57 am
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A well caught last line capturing that special early light of the day, and it's bouncing around everything including the teaspoon if you were adding sugar. :)
warm regards,
Alan
February 20th, 2015 at 12:28 pm
Beautiful Chen-ou. I especially love "spangles of sunlight".
February 21st, 2015 at 12:48 am
caviar on crackers
champagne to cheer
four turns five
June 8th, 2015 at 4:59 am
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