in between your life and mine a wilderness of brambles Published by Joy Reed MacVane Joy Reed MacVane spends time in both Long Island, Maine and New York?s Hudson Valley. View all posts by Joy Reed MacVane
Fine verse… and the brambles must be overcome each day; an echo. _m dreams step into the limb-lace shadows sunrise Reply
The 'brambles' truly set this apart. It immediately brought to mind one of Basho's in Yoel Hoffmann's 'Japanese Death Poems" Within your life and mine there lives a cherry blossom Reply
Ah, but this reader suspects that it is worth overcoming these brambles! Love the narrative in this. Marion Reply
Fine verse… and the brambles must be overcome each day; an echo. _m
dreams step
into the limb-lace shadows
sunrise
The 'brambles' truly set this apart. It immediately brought to mind one of Basho's in Yoel Hoffmann's 'Japanese Death Poems"
Within your life and mine
there lives
a cherry blossom
Ah, but this reader suspects that it is worth overcoming these brambles! Love the narrative in this.
Marion
A familiar predicament acutely expressed – very nice!
Beautiful.
bit cheezy