your life and mine
a wilderness of brambles
—Joy Reed MacVane
Issue 15.1 | 18 May 2015
Fine verse… and the brambles must be overcome each day; an echo. _m
into the limb-lace shadows
The 'brambles' truly set this apart. It immediately brought to mind one of Basho's in Yoel Hoffmann's 'Japanese Death Poems"
Within your life and mine
a cherry blossom
Ah, but this reader suspects that it is worth overcoming these brambles! Love the narrative in this.
A familiar predicament acutely expressed – very nice!
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