divorce court ?
I park near
the funeral home

7 Responses

  1. Olivier Schopfer Says:

    Great one, Bryon. I like the way lines 1 and 3 mirror each other. It rings a bell:

    hand in hand
    with my shadow—
    divorce day

    Olivier Schopfer, Modern Haiku 45.3, Autumn 2014.

  2. chief276 Says:

    Funny, but not without depth. A divorce is the death of something.

    final decree . . .
    not quite sure when
    it began

    Bill Kenney

  3. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Finality, of both sorts. Very effective.


  4. Alan Summers Says:

    the rain
    almost a friend
    this funeral

    Alan Summers
    Azami #28 (Japan, 1995)
    The Temple Bell Stops: Contemporary Poems of Grief, Loss and Change (Modern English Tanka Press 2012)

  5. Mohsin Says:

    divorce court is near the funeral home? divorce can be freedom for some.

  6. mua flycam Says:

    You're so funny, but I like that kind of thinking. hhh

  7. camera siêu nh? Says:

    You're so funny, but not without depth

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