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  1. Great one, Bryon. I like the way lines 1 and 3 mirror each other. It rings a bell:

    hand in hand
    with my shadow—
    divorce day

    Olivier Schopfer, Modern Haiku 45.3, Autumn 2014.

    1. Funny, but not without depth. A divorce is the death of something.

      final decree . . .
      not quite sure when
      it began

      Bill Kenney

  2. the rain
    almost a friend
    this funeral

    Alan Summers
    Azami #28 (Japan, 1995)
    The Temple Bell Stops: Contemporary Poems of Grief, Loss and Change (Modern English Tanka Press 2012)

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