divorce court – I park near the funeral home
—Bryon Cannon
Issue 15.1 | 19 May 2015
Great one, Bryon. I like the way lines 1 and 3 mirror each other. It rings a bell:
hand in hand with my shadow— divorce day
Olivier Schopfer, Modern Haiku 45.3, Autumn 2014.
Funny, but not without depth. A divorce is the death of something.
final decree . . . not quite sure when it began
Bill Kenney
Finality, of both sorts. Very effective.
marion
the rain almost a friend this funeral
Alan Summers Azami #28 (Japan, 1995) The Temple Bell Stops: Contemporary Poems of Grief, Loss and Change (Modern English Tanka Press 2012)
divorce court is near the funeral home? divorce can be freedom for some.
You're so funny, but I like that kind of thinking. hhh
You're so funny, but not without depth
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May 19th, 2015 at 10:28 am
Great one, Bryon. I like the way lines 1 and 3 mirror each other. It rings a bell:
hand in hand
with my shadow—
divorce day
Olivier Schopfer, Modern Haiku 45.3, Autumn 2014.
May 19th, 2015 at 11:24 am
Funny, but not without depth. A divorce is the death of something.
final decree . . .
not quite sure when
it began
Bill Kenney
May 19th, 2015 at 2:57 pm
Finality, of both sorts. Very effective.
marion
May 27th, 2015 at 3:40 pm
the rain
almost a friend
this funeral
Alan Summers
Azami #28 (Japan, 1995)
The Temple Bell Stops: Contemporary Poems of Grief, Loss and Change (Modern English Tanka Press 2012)
July 12th, 2015 at 12:49 am
divorce court is near the funeral home? divorce can be freedom for some.
June 23rd, 2018 at 2:30 am
You're so funny, but I like that kind of thinking. hhh
December 13th, 2019 at 11:26 pm
You're so funny, but not without depth