on a table

in the sun


2 Responses

  1. purehaiku Says:

    enjoyed the contrast of the warm, tropical oranges and the cold icicles!

  2. Alan Summers Says:

    Intriguing that oranges is in italics.

    Is this a domestic situation, or are icicles in the sun a symbol for something that is not quite right.

    you ask me
    what rhymes
    with orange

    Alan Summers
    Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012)

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